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"The book was okay, but at 1,012 pages not worth the effort. I guess too famous to require a serious editor."
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"Interesting concept but suffers from a desperate need for severe editing. 500 pages could easily be cut from this 1000 page tome; almost a stream of consciousness where so much is unnecessary and just slows down the story. Are editors afraid to cu..."
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"I really love the characters in this series, but this outing was hard to read. I, for one, don't know about (or care in any way) about games or online forums. So the interjection of pages of online dialogue was annoying to me. I don't want to re..."
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"So disappointed by this overly long and needlessly complicated novel."
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