I understand that this was probably a rush job. She may have been dictating it to someone. Parts are really well written - others not so much.
She makes a better case for some of her positions in the book than what i have heard on TV.
No comments about dating Willie Brown, college drug use experimentation, why she chose the law school that she did. Again, this was a hurry up and get to print.
A lot will depend if she is successful in getting the nomination. If she does - others will develop better bios.